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dad's not coming home... by Z-A-D-Y dad's not coming home... by Z-A-D-Y
explanation: mum and dad are splitting up and well... dads not coming back.. the little kid is my brother's fursona wild. and ofc its left to me to tell him... dads not coming home...

oh well... pose reff: [link]
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:icontreebuzza:
You're artwork is very good in this and the scene is striking if you know what I mean.
The only things I have to say about it is this:
The eyes for both mother and child are positioned a little strangley and may be just a little small compared to the head.
The boys chest fur may also be just a little too spikey and the fur should really go down.
The mother portrays the sympathy and sadness well to her son, but the anatomy of the jaw and mouth could've been a little better. The mouth slopes down a little too much not leaving much space for a well defined jawline.
OTHERWISE, I love the scene and the mothers slumping of the shoulders, putting her arm up to her son's leg. The black dress helps pull everything together and the boys questioning stare makes this all the more realistic a scene.

:D:D:D
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:icontreebuzza:
Treebuzza Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student
*crying* So emotional...awww
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
; v ; hurr <3 its ok its ok *hug*
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:icontreebuzza:
Treebuzza Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student
:hug:
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:iconsnowy-kun:
Snowy-kun Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Awwww :c
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
e3e
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Gamal-the-rookie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hello Critique from :iconanthro-feedback:

Zadyyy, what happened to the wonderful shiny hair I have been used to see. :noes:


Okay, stuff that is not so good, and can be looked upon and learned from:
- The background should never, ever be entirely black, unless you are doing lighting. The mothers ear is black, and it turns nearly impossible to see, not good. While black is good for characters and objects in focus, it should never be used for background.
use a darkish grey, mabye darkish grey-blue.
(not saying you should avoid it completely though. Just not in contrast to other black areas. )

- The kids eye. While I can understand why a fully grown person would have comparatively smaller eyes to a kid, the kid should not have that small eyes. It is offsetting.

Good stuff, I like:
- Clothing, and fur. All nice and a sketchy style I find attractive. ( not like That. xD )
- Expressions: While the eyes may be a bit funky, The expressions still emit an.. well expression :meow: Good job on that.


Keep drawing! More shiny hair! :XD:

Thanks for submitting, Hope I did not come off as too strict. (because I fear that)
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
~sparkle sparkle~ haha really? sparkleing hair?
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:icongamal-the-rookie:
Gamal-the-rookie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well... I am a dummy :dummy:
I Confused you with another deviant. Who does sparkeling/shiny hair.
Sorry for the misunderstanding.

My feedback still stands. :XD:
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Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mrmm maybe i did do a few shiny hair thinggys....
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:icongamal-the-rookie:
Gamal-the-rookie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Actually, Seems like I was right after all.
Stop confusing me... Staph, please xD

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Your style have just changed so much in so little time. I don't like that change.
You have also been extreemly productive, so I could not find these at my first glance prior to my comment at first.

Well played :XD:
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Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;P haha well i don't think the shiny hair fitted the picture!! its depressive picture not a happy one!
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Gamal-the-rookie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can understand that.
:3
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Serendipisie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I've been here. I know how this feels exactly. Though this is an amazing piece, the emotions behind it are very well put out and sad. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here. I've got a feeling your a strong person and will make it through, you all stay strong. sometimes things just don't work out, but good will come your way. :heart:
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Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you <33
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Serendipisie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
np <3
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RazielTheFallen1 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really awesome pic and the mode of it is really touching.Nice work.And be strong during the hard time :/
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks...
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:iconfox334o4:
fox334o4 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well........
it'll be alright.
I promise.
it'll take time but it'll be okay.
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeh... we'll pull through...
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:iconfox334o4:
fox334o4 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you need someone to talk to, i'll be here~
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconfox334o4:
fox334o4 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np
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Finsti Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my...
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm?
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Finsti Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this picture makes me terrible sad :I
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im sowwie
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Finsti Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah no problem at all :)
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kanniki Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student General Artist
That's so sad... But very good job <333
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:iconz-a-d-y:
Z-A-D-Y Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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kanniki Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem ^^
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